'The Mister' Excerpt Re-written

I'm a bit late to the announcement but apparently E.L. James is writing another book, this one has an excerpt released and it appears to promise to be written much like Fifty Shades Of Grey. You can find the excerpt through this link. I'm not a fan but I thought, rewriting it to something I would like could be a good writing exercise! So without further blabbing, enjoy!

Alessia pushed the door open with her hip, toweling her hair dry with one towel and another towel around her body. Glancing up she froze, sprawled across the bed was him.

“Mister.” Alessia breathed. She had assumed he would have gone back to the office by now.

Her eyes trailed over his body, starting at his mess of brown hair. Her eyes lingered on his bare shoulders and went down his sun-kissed back. A blush flushed down her face, disappearing beneath the towel, when she reached his hips beneath the comforter.

He’s still naked. Alessia did not realize she could have blushed more. But then he started stirring slowly. Alessia took an involuntary step back as he lifted his head from where it was buried in in the pillow. His hardened eyes met hers and stopped her breath in her throat. A small tremble ran down her spine knowing that he would be angry because she woke him. She knew it was just his gaze on her, but Alessia felt as if he was wrapping his long fingers around her throat. She swore that time stopped until he dropped his head back to the pillow and appeared to let sleep claim him again.